There's hair on the lower right has an angular bend that needs to be softened into a curve.
The bkgd color is close in value to the lady's shoulders. I might play with that balance, or perhaps implement a slim, firm but fluid contour line to differentiate the subject from the bkgd.
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I'd lighten up that shadow near the base of the neck a bit.
There's hair on the lower right has an angular bend that needs to be softened into a curve.
The bkgd color is close in value to the lady's shoulders. I might play with that balance, or perhaps implement a slim, firm but fluid contour line to differentiate the subject from the bkgd.
Shaping up nicely, though. Let's see ten more!
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